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Evening at the gym
Author: SG
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(Added on Nov 23, 2008)
(This month 20230 readers) (Total 41137 readers) |
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A late trip to the gym to burn calories and distract an aroused but unfullfilled mind leads to an evening in bondage |
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Weighed
Average (?): (9/10) |
Average
Rating: (9.5/10) |
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Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Feb 1, 2009 |
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Very good build-up. Emotional turmoil of the 'victim' is excellently portrayed too. Very erotic bondage story that is slowly taking a nasty streak, which makes me wonder where this is going to end. I can only hope SG will come back to this to add further content. Oh, and there's a lot of silly spelling mistakes as well, so better proofread before posting. JJ (10/10)
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Reviewer:
spnk1
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Dec 4, 2008 |
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I really enjoyed it! Hopeing more is to come! (9/10)
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Reviewer:
Curtis
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Nov 27, 2008 |
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Very promising start, but so far more tease and foreshadowing than actual delivery. (9/10)
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Reviewer:
mollydoll
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Nov 23, 2008 |
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OMG!!! This is my kind of story... please please please write more!!! (10/10)
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