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Awakening to a New Life
Author: bluesub6
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(Added on Oct 28, 2008)
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A young man wakes up one morning with no memory. He finds he does not live alone however, but stays with a loving yet dominant older woman. He doesn't remember anything about the nature of their relationship. This gives him the opportunity to get to know her all over again, with no preconceived notions |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
xSoCalCynicx
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Jan 30, 2011 |
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Needed a little proofing, which is why I gave it 'only' a nine score. Excellent denouement and overall very well written - easily keeps the reader interested. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Falcon
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Nov 1, 2008 |
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An absolutely novel and thrilling premise. The sexual parts are there in delcious detail but can only be enjoyed in the context of a very nuanced relationship. Patience is required. I started reading this last evening and got frustrated with how long it was taking to unravel the mystery. I gave up. This morning I decided to have another go at it and was very glad I did. If the author would do some careful editing to remove redundancies this story could easily be worth a ten. One of the most fascinating aspects is how the young man bonds so intensely to a woman who is not only older but not his physical type. The author has avoided detailed physical descriptions of the two characters which makes it fun to envision oneself as one or the other of the two characters. Or even flip the story to be about a young woman in an intense relationship with an older man. All it takes is imaginatrion. (9/10)
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