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Wild Child
Author: Jake
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(Added on Oct 16, 2008)
(This month 29512 readers) (Total 67654 readers) |
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A teenage hell raiser gets the discipline she has needed all of her life. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Feb 1, 2009 |
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A bit odd to have a girl of almost twenty, act like some hormone-challenged pre-puberecent kid. Story would have worked better if Mary would have been presented as a thirteen year old. Now, her behaviour comes across as completely unrealistic.
Good read tho.
JJ
(8/10)
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sweetsad0
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Jan 22, 2009 |
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i had a certain affinity for it from the start, considering my nickname was wild child when i was young. i am also a fan of the idea of branding. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
mysticrose
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Oct 28, 2008 |
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Hi Jake, i enjoyed your story very much, i really do hope that you will write another chapter or two. (9/10)
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JonMaddux
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Oct 27, 2008 |
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Loved it! Hope to read more soon! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
AndreaDawne
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Oct 25, 2008 |
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Hi Jake, I remember reading this story and I thought I had rated it and I was a bit disappointed in myself that I didn't. Usually when the story is really good I rate them.
But man I like how the girl got it at the end. I can NOT wait to hear more what's coming in store for her! Excellent story thanks for sharing! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
jheller69
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Oct 23, 2008 |
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Well done. Can't wait for the next chapter to see what further punishment the much deserving little trollop gets. (9/10)
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SubmissiveKitten
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Oct 22, 2008 |
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please !!! post a new chapter Sir , girl really enjoyed it it was very well written and kept my attention :) (9/10)
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zyntar
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Oct 21, 2008 |
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Well written. Great detail.I am looking forward to the next chapter. (9/10)
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BrazenBitch
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Oct 18, 2008 |
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very well done, can't wait until her cunt gets fucked to see how you describe that. (9/10)
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irishman112145
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Oct 17, 2008 |
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I think the only thing to say is excelent. I can not wait until you write more of this. Thanks (10/10)
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