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The Nanny
Author: J Lewis
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(Added on Oct 11, 2008)
(This month 173336 readers) (Total 323390 readers) |
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Young beautiful woman signs with a weathly family to be a Nanny, becomes a sex slave |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
stimpy
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Jan 19, 2009 |
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Excellent writing. Interesting story line with a nice switch of pacing. I agree with JimmyJump that the thoughts of the main character add a lot, though I found the arc absorbingly unpredictable. (10/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 15, 2009 |
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I was thrilled by the start. The scenes in the private plane were some of the best opening paragraphs I've read in a while.
Sadly (to me), the story rapidly settles into a routine that has been done many times before, without real moments of surprise. May sound a tad blasé, but that's how I feel.
What makes this story stand out, is the expert handling of the main character's inner musings and the way she adapts to her precarious situation.
Also, it is a good thing you are an excellent writer, J Lewis, otherwise, "The Nanny" wouldn't rise above the status of "everyday fodder".
A fat niner, thanks to the author's writing skills.
JJ (9/10)
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mkemse
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Jan 9, 2009 |
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great start, can't wait for more, i keep re reading it and itgets better ech time GREAT story (10/10)
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joshjg
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Dec 28, 2008 |
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Good story, bit long winded though and would prefer a bit more humiliation and debasement, but well worth the read. (8/10)
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takarada
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Dec 9, 2008 |
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hope you find time to continue it (10/10)
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Callisto82
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Nov 24, 2008 |
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Truly great story, best thing I've read in the past few month! Actually, this one keeps me checking for updates daily - awesome! (10/10)
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BDMjane
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Nov 5, 2008 |
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Really love your story. (9/10)
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meadow muffin
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Nov 1, 2008 |
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Loved the story and am looking forward to new chapters. Systematic torture by the parents, experimental torture by the daughter and brutal rape by the son, resulting in unsanctioned orgasms and subsequent punishment. (10/10)
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Falcon
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Oct 13, 2008 |
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Very imaginative! I don't think I have ever read an erotic story that started out quite this way! Story should probably carry a rating of "nc" instead of reluctant based on what is revealed so far. I would like a bit more context on how she decided to take this gig and why she didn't bolt when there was a surprise change in travel plans. Looking forward to more chapters! (9/10)
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rocket71
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Oct 13, 2008 |
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Great story (9/10)
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irishman112145
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Oct 13, 2008 |
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I cannot wait until you add nire chapters to this story. I was hoping it would continue much longer. (10/10)
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plump_slut
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Oct 12, 2008 |
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Looking forward to reading the next installment (7/10)
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sirbor
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Oct 12, 2008 |
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Very well written. I look forward to read more details about her employment. (9/10)
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