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Jenny's Bad Day
Author: Zenmackie
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(Added on Sep 13, 2008)
(This month 13358 readers) (Total 23088 readers) |
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Jenny displeases her Master...for the third time! |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Oct 11, 2010 |
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Most excellent recounting of an event in Jenny's life. Although I must add that there seems to be paid less attention to the train of thought and musings of the parties involved -especially Jenny- than what I'm used of from the Mackster.
But that lack is compensated through vivid descriptions of what's going on outside her head.
Very good writing.
By the way, I just came across my review on a story by Zen Monkey. Since a Maki is also a monkey, I was wondering if both Zens are one. In that respect, a rewriting of "Zens And Zensibilities" suggests itself...
And hey!, isn't becoming one the purpose of going Zen?
JJ (9/10)
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