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Beneath
Author: Shwenn
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(Added on Aug 7, 2008)
(This month 35867 readers) (Total 53089 readers) |
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In a police state without habeas corpus, a woman must become a slave to the police to protect her jailed husband from possible death. She is born on waves of office politics and a plan that involved her long before she knew of the sexual deviance running through every strata of the government. |
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| Reviewer:
cheapskate
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Aug 20, 2008 |
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I am enjoying this very much. The author writes very well and is highly talented. I particularly like the dark menacing atmosphere. My only criticism would be the scenes involving activities that would almost certainly lead to physical damage. (9/10)
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igachu80
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Aug 9, 2008 |
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I think my favorite part was in the porn shop. The clerk was my favorite character, and all the measurements were good foreshadowing--munchies for the imagination. The watersports and such aren't my cup of tea, but that's just me. Like the other reviewer said, good humiliation (I especially liked how her breasts were exposed).
This is a more serious writing style than "Like Dew", perhaps because more is at stake for the main character. It jumps into the main thrust of the plot early on, which is a good way of capturing the audience. It worked for me.
Hopefully we'll soon find out what all those measurements were for!
Good job. (8/10)
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massivereader
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Aug 9, 2008 |
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One of the best written peices I've seen on this site. Spelling, vocabulary and grammar are all near to perfect. Chapter one is expository with some good inital action to kick things right off. Chapter two leaps right into things while lending depth of characterization to the submissive heroine. There is a good bit of exceptionally creative and well writen humiliation content in this chapter, avoiding the most common tropes.
All in all; good stuff by a talented new writer, one who is right up there in sophistication and technique with danielle and angiquesophie.
Can't wait for more chapters to show up.
(10/10)
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