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The Naked Gardener
Author: Captv8td
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(Added on Jul 31, 2008)
(This month 59550 readers) (Total 100247 readers) |
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Kathleen took advantage of the privacy of her backyard to work on an all-over tan. Not only would she bronze her whole body, but she would enjoy some thrilling moments. She had no idea that it would change her life forever. |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Sojurboy
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Feb 5, 2011 |
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As usual, Captv8td spins an outstanding yarn. Good clean fun is had by all, and a real picture begins to emerge. She almost has it. Just a little more description of the senses, such as smell would be the "cherry on the sundae." I love being privy to the innermost thoughts and fears of the dominated and dominant. That is the spice here. (8/10)
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Dryhill
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Apr 9, 2010 |
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One of Captv8td's best stories, well at least in my view. Some of the story is less believable than the majority (the original capture moves slowly enough to be believable but the parents use of their daughter is less so) but this does not detract from a good yarn. Thank you for a good piece of fiction. (10/10)
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mkemse
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Jan 17, 2009 |
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wonder grteat or any word you wish to use (10/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 16, 2009 |
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Another marvel of a tale. Excellent pace and characterizations, great sex and prime writing. Top stuff!
JJ (10/10)
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juliusen
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Oct 27, 2008 |
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Please write more, your stories are very good. (10/10)
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SirPat45
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Oct 16, 2008 |
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This was a story that was as close to perfect as you could get. It started with the character fantasizing about being a submissive and then a close friend recognized what was in her and put the plans in motion to bring out that submission. I would say it would rank in my top 5 favorite stories here in the library. (10/10)
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msilsby
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Sep 14, 2008 |
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A well written erotic tale that can be enjoyed by all. Yet another romantic slave tale by captv8td that tickles the senses just so! (10/10)
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lockedup737
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Sep 6, 2008 |
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I absolutely loved this story! The idea of unwilling slavery combined with a little compassion and love is a VERY difficult thing to write about. I have tried myself and I am not sure that I have been able to make it work but this author has. I hope he/she continues the story. I loved how she dealt with Mandy at the end of Part 3! (10/10)
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suissepervert
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Sep 5, 2008 |
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That's a good start to your new story. As ever well written and a joy to read.
What else will Kathleen experience? Hope you continue soon.
brother kidnap both girls? (9/10)
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bobo69
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Aug 21, 2008 |
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Great story, Very well written.
Love to hear about women who realize their place and come to accept it willingly. (10/10)
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Slave_Mike
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Aug 12, 2008 |
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Very good story. one of my new favorites especially with the twist at the end with her father. I hope you write more to add on to this story! (10/10)
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rocket71
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Aug 11, 2008 |
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This is the best story I,ve seen in a while. Hope there is muck more to come. (10/10)
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Elkor
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Aug 10, 2008 |
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I liked the story because it had some good development and background. Unfortunately, it seems to skip over what could have been some really interesting elements. It's like there are some chapters missing. (8/10)
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Master_chris
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Aug 8, 2008 |
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I enjoyed this story very much.
I look forward to read the next chapter (10/10)
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johhny
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Aug 7, 2008 |
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erotic to the point of extreme male ball bursting pleasure, keep up this excellent work (10/10)
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SirTimothyk
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Aug 7, 2008 |
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one of the best F/f stories i have read! (9/10)
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