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Caitlin's life as aslave
Author: BJojomogo
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(Added on Jun 22, 2008)
(This month 27995 readers) (Total 50229 readers) |
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Young girl, alone in the world, surrenders to complete slavery |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
AZ1958
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Jun 24, 2016 |
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Needs more length. It's a start but needs more flesh... Is more an outline than a complete story. Is a great start though. (7/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 20, 2009 |
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"Caitlin" reads a bit as a preparation text for some journalist who's about to make a documentary.
Writing is good, but the story was a bit too short to my taste.
JJ (8/10)
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ukMasterC
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Jul 11, 2008 |
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Very good, I look forward to reading more of your work (8/10)
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masterdw
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Jun 24, 2008 |
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Wonderful story, but why do all these stories not mention what happens when the slave has a period? Is she given a tampon or a pad? Is she left to bleed all over herself? Is she used? Sick minds like mine want to know. Perhaps in your aequel. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
BJojomogo
(Edit) (Jul 21, 2008)
- Sadly for sick minds like ours, there are drugs to control periods and birth control. Lybrel is the latest combined drug to be authoruised in the US. Starting every story with an explanation of this could be boring, but I will mention it once.Thanks for your comments
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