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My Daughter Slave
Author: Oak
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(Added on Jun 22, 2008)
(This month 123158 readers) (Total 203792 readers) |
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Charlene is a very temperamental teenager, who forces her petite and meek mother to become her slave. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 9, 2009 |
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ok just not realistic (6/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 7, 2009 |
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Completely unbelievable story. Sex/punishing scenes are enjoyable, but the poor grammar and spelling take away half of the reading fun.
JJ (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
bullfinch
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Nov 4, 2008 |
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Good story. Should the title not read 'My daughter's slave'? (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
johnislucy
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Oct 21, 2008 |
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like the way she was pinnished. the taining was very good. love the f-f beatings.. love the younger beating the older. (10/10)
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DommeLovesSub
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Oct 4, 2008 |
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I hope I will read more, soon. (8/10)
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ukMasterC
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Jul 19, 2008 |
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Brilliant story look forward to reading more of it. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
quincy451
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Jul 13, 2008 |
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This story is long enough to be interesting and brief enough to get where it is going in a hurry and well written enough for you to enjoy going there. Reminds me of Debporn if any of you remember what that was...only longer and thus better. But I like that this seems to be going in a fresh direction. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Oak
(Edit) (Jul 13, 2008)
- Thanks for the nice words about my story. I'm working on chapter 3 and hope to have it finished soon.
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quincy451
(Edit) (Jul 17, 2008)
- Good eo hear chapter 3 in the works...I will be back to look for it.
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quincy451
(Edit) (Sep 26, 2008)
- part 3, got it worth the wait...thanks for getting ti done. I even liked the bigger type as it was presented on the web.
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| Reviewer:
rocket71
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Jul 13, 2008 |
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I like were this story is going. Looking forward to the next chapter. (8/10)
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