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The Twin
Author: The Domina of Paradise
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(Added on Jun 8, 2008)
(This month 16611 readers) (Total 27776 readers) |
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A sister takes vengeance on the cruel men who hurt her twin. |
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| Reviewer:
slave2isis
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Jun 10, 2008 |
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this is quite easily one of the best stories ive ever had the privilege to read its charecter rendition were supremely well written and the plot of the older sister seeking out the ultimate revenge was absolutely riveting and the fate suffered by the three males justly deserved,charting her rise from poverty to the pinacle of society and excacting a fiendish means of revenge,overall after reading this story Domina of Paradise for the third time i think it shows what an exceptionally author You are it prays You find a publisher because Your work is equal to the most establised writers,it believe the plot would make a marvelous play or film drama for a far wider audience of individuals to read outside our community,it cant wait for Your first publication will be straight out the front of the queue begging for Your autograph Your artdent and adoring fan and proud and devoted british slave (10/10)
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