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Thesis
Author: Freddie Clegg
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(Added on Jun 8, 2008)
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Freddie Clegg & Phil Lane tell the tale of Jenny and her journey in search of her BDSM self... |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jun 17, 2010 |
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I think Freddie Clegg must spend as least as much time --if not more-- to the re-puzzling of the different parts of his stories than he does to the actual writing, because most of those writings are clever interweavings of all kinds of musing and situations, without missing the beat.
i started on "Thesis" because of the follow-up ("Such Sweet Sorrow") and didn't want to 'go to battle' unprepared. Although I remembered from the first paragraph that i already did read it, but didn't get to a review.
All I can add is that, once again, Freddie was able to come up with a refreshing story, with nicely drawn independent characters. Besides an alluring and intelligent storyline, the interaction between the different characters is once more a treat.
Great stuff this is.
And give my regards to Phil.
JJ (10/10)
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- Replied by:
freddie_clegg
(Edit) (Jun 17, 2010)
- Well, thanks for this review and the great score.
Phil and I do work hard on trying to get the plot right - and both Thesis and Such Sweet Sorrow went through quite a lot of changes before we decided to start posting them. We both think there's a role for stories in the BDSM genre that have characters as well as situations so its good to know its appreciated. I'll certainly pass on your regards.
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Feb 1, 2010 |
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This is a sort of placeholder vote until something actually happens. I should have checked whether this story had the 'slow' code; it definitely deserves it. The style of writing and professionalism (spelling, punctuation, grammar) are good, though. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
freddie_clegg
(Edit) (Jul 10, 2008)
- Thanks, Curtiss, I guess it is a bit of a slow burn. There should be more soon, and I'll add the story codes.... :-) Hope you enjoy it as it progresses.
- Replied by:
Curtis
(Edit) (Feb 1, 2010)
- Sorry, Freddie. I just saw that I never came back to re-review this story. Honestly, I'm not a fan of your (very well thought out and elaborately detailed) fictional world, so I'll save you the pain of having to endure any further reviews from me. I did have to say, however, that installment 8 alone was worth raising your score on this one. I tried doing something similar (in an introduction, rather than as a wrap-up) in the only story I've submitted to this site to date, but yours just surpassed mine by miles. Damn you. By the way, those wedge pillows were sold in the U.S. back in the '60s as something for people with bad backs who like to read propped up in bed (as I do). My dad had one, but eventually he destroyed it in his efforts to improve it.
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| Reviewer:
littleone_
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Sep 10, 2008 |
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This is an amazing,erotic, exciting, arousing, enthralling story. One of the best, professional or amateur, I've ever read. While the fist chapter does not have a lot of overt sexual activity it sets up the story line line for the rest of the story. Mr. Clegg not only made me want to be Jenny, he not only make me feel what she was feeling, he made me became Jenny in my mind. I have three words to describe "Thesis"; WOW, amazing and more. The only reason I didn't yet give this story and 10 is because I never do unless a story has an ending. Frankly, I am praying that that this story doesn't end for many, many chapters so I can keep vicariously being Jenny. Thank you Mr. Clegg for letting me have this amazing experience through reading your so lovely and captivating story, Sir.
I just read Mr. Clegg's latest chapter and even giving that this story is not yet finished it is so good I am going to break my own rule and move my rating to a 10 and I'd give it a 20 if I could. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
freddie_clegg
(Edit) (Aug 2, 2008)
- Well, littleone, thanks for this enthusiastic and complimentary review. I must also put in a credit for Phil Lane, my co-author on this one.
Don't worry we'll follow this through to the end. More coming soon.
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