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The Morning After
Author: Rose Wilder
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(Added on Jun 1, 2008)
(This month 12824 readers) (Total 19221 readers) |
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Sequel to "Punished on Valentine's Day". Another Jacqueline and Victoria Story |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Jun 16, 2010 |
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There are a few (very few) grammatical errors but they hardly distract from the story. In fact if i could i would be giving this story a higher rating purely because of the correct usage of "whom" rather than the usual "who", it is a long time since i have seen that.
Another excellent piece of fiction involving two lovely people who are becoming almost real in my mind. It is rare to see a novel were love plays a central theme without it becoming mawdling or tacky. Thank you very much Mistree Rose for making me a slave of your writings.
This boys only sadness is it has now read all the stories on this site and will have to wait for another. Could this boy be presumptive enough to suggest two or three prequals:-
1. About J&V's first meeting and becoming 24/7 Mistress/slave.
2 (and/or 3). About the computer hacker and telling parents plus incident whilst Christmas shopping.
: ) (10/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jun 11, 2010 |
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What I like about Rose Wilder's stories (besides the content, of course) is the simplicity. And that simplicity doesn't mean bland. At all.
In fact, 'simple' stories are the best, especially when the writer is skilled. Rose is. Skilled. That's why this simpicity is misleading, because taking simplicity to an almost perfect level (and only because real perfection doesn't exist, or better, is unattainable for imperfect beings) is an artform in itself.
Well done, Rose Wilder.
JJ (10/10)
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emodis
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Jun 10, 2010 |
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The second story that i've read by Rose Wilder and just as with the first i thoroughly enjoyed it. Victoria's needs aroused similar feelings in me (blushes) (9/10)
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