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Hard Labor
Author: velvetglove
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(Added on May 26, 2008)
(This month 95668 readers) (Total 141661 readers) |
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Set in 2013, a young married couple are sentenced to a life of Hard Labor, in a world where they have no rights. The list of story codes is not complete (I don’t want to reveal all in advance) but the following will NOT feature: young, teen, extreme torture, snuff. Hard Labor will be posted from May to September 2008. |
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| Reviewer:
schoolboylv
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Jul 26, 2008 |
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Sometimes you go a little fast without fully explaining each scene. Also, you seem to jump around quite a bit and that makes it a little difficult to follow. Other than that this is an excellent idea. Keep up the good work! (8/10)
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Lovecraft
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Jul 6, 2008 |
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Great story! Much slower moving than what I usually prefer, but the premise is intriguing and the promise of many things yet to come is always there grabbing at you. (9/10)
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JonMaddux
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Jun 29, 2008 |
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finished chpt 8, was looking forward to a nice detailed version of how ferns ass was delivered up. Its an awesome story even if i missed that. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
velvetglove
(Edit) (Jul 2, 2008)
- Hi Jon, Thanks for the review. The delivery will be there, videoed, for Derek to enjoy soon.
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Falcon
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Jun 25, 2008 |
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5/27/08: Intriguing premise for story. Looking forward to more chapters. May adjust rating when there is more to go on.
6/12/08: Just finished chapters 2-5 and find that author is really delivering a story as good as the first chapter! This is one of the most exquisite tales of forced sexual slavery I have read. And the scat scenes do help the story work! Am increasing my rating from 7 to 9!
6/25/08: Just read chapters 6-7. More neat stuff! Derek's experience as waiter most novel. Keep it coming! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
velvetglove
(Edit) (Jun 13, 2008)
- Thanks, Falcon, for your comments and re-rating. I know that scat is not to everybody's taste (for example 'littleone' below), but I do not use it gratuitously, rather as a weapon to portray character (Steele) and situation (extreme, unlimited). Chapters 6 & 7 are in the pipeline. Regards, Velvetglove
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FootSlaveE
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Jun 25, 2008 |
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Very strong start. I am really looking forward to reading future chapters!
6/25: WOW! Just keeps getting better and better. I can't wait for future chapters. You are truly the master of this genre. (10/10)
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kemosabe
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Jun 22, 2008 |
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Looking forward to more. Held my attention like few in this site. (9/10)
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Rocky
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Jun 10, 2008 |
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Another gem by one of my favorite authors. Please keep the chapters coming! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
velvetglove
(Edit) (Jun 13, 2008)
- Thanks Rocky. I'm using shorter chapters than before (for example, After the Pestilence) and will try to keep them cumming regularly, if you know what I mean. Regards, Velvetglove
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littleone_
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Jun 6, 2008 |
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The story had promise but at the end of the day it is basically about; scat that was where velvetglove centered the first part of the story and for my taste way over did it. (6/10)
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GuiltyKarma
(Edit) (Jun 6, 2008)
- Littleone, it says in the description that there is scat. If you don't enjoy scat then don't read the story. Don't write a negative review because you don't enjoy the content in the story when it says it's in there at the begining!
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| Reviewer:
GuiltyKarma
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Jun 3, 2008 |
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yes! Yet another excellent VelvetGlove story! Shows all the promise of Five Words and After the Pestilence. I can't wait to read much more! Kudos to the author of these wonderful stories! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
velvetglove
(Edit) (Jun 4, 2008)
- Hi Guilty and everybody else who has reviewed Hard labor. If you would like to know how to get a sneak preview of chapters earlier than they are posted on this site, please get in touch.
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gnuman
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Jun 2, 2008 |
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The second two chapters really put the first chapter into proper context. The story should get better as velvetglove brings us to the birthday party and later. (9/10)
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Cutemary1978
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May 31, 2008 |
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I love Velvetgloves stories! This story has a lot of promise and I truly appreciate how well he weaves the plot and develops the characters. Personally I love stories where the husband and wife are put in a situation through their own nieve nature or arrogance and they are embarrassed, made to look silly, humiliated and broken down. After the Pestilence was great! (9/10)
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DungeonMaster6
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May 30, 2008 |
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This story has promise, and I agree with the others: my rating could go higher with subsequent chapters. (7/10)
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suetc
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May 30, 2008 |
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Great introduction, good to have something different for change (8/10)
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grinner666
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May 30, 2008 |
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Nice start. I WILL adjust my rating as the story continues, but though I enjoyed it, the first chapter was too short to merit a better review. (7/10)
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