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One Hour
Author: J.
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(Added on Dec 22, 2001)
(This month 15244 readers) (Total 28699 readers) |
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Once a week, her husband delivers her to a man for a discipline session. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JadedKitty
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Dec 25, 2005 |
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Great short story (8/10)
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La Toya
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Apr 29, 2005 |
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Good story, leaves you wanting more (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
LordVetinari
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Jul 4, 2004 |
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Wonderful,erotic, intriguing, fantastic! (10/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Apr 13, 2004 |
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Elegant! It is hard to write a short, short story but "J" did it. A good short, short always makes you long for more. I really don't know how, within the confines of the art, the story could be made better. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
pbugler
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Jan 30, 2004 |
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A really enjoyable "quickie". I'd love to see this story expanded into a much longer and more detailed one. (9/10)
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crickette
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Nov 28, 2003 |
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Good story. The story was short but very detailed. It did a lot in one page. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
esclavadana
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Jul 16, 2003 |
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I agree with Curtis. It seems a good introduction for a longer story. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Jul 13, 2003 |
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A good little vignette. Leaves me wanting more. Too short. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
MissDirected
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Jan 30, 2002 |
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OK, but not too inventive. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
bmaster
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Dec 23, 2001 |
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sweet little story! (8/10)
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