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Savage African Capture
Author: Shabbadew2002
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(Added on May 14, 2008)
(This month 92385 readers) (Total 171705 readers) |
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A couple on a honeymoon safari find themselves in very hot water. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
lonewolf8
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Apr 20, 2011 |
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I would have rated this a ten if it had been a white American or English couple because to me it would have been hotter seeing a wealthy, proud white couple reduced in this same manner.
Asians tend to be more submissive in nature, so it wasn't as much of a stretch maybe.
But having said that, this story deserves much praise on it's plot and inventiveness! Nicely written, very erotic and the descent of the couple into mere playthings for the villagers was very well executed.
I would have liked to see more detail on the rapes and emotions of the female during her ordeals.
There is a movie I saw years ago called The Naked Prey where a white man was literally cooked to death in mud and clay by African natives. The scene in this reminded me of that movie.
It would have been nice if the girl was kept inside the clay longer, with maybe holes for eyes and mouth and of course pussy and ass, maybe exposing her breasts also.
Or no holes for the eyes so that she can feel and experience but not see who or what is being done to her, but kept in the clay for a few weeks or even months, breaking her completely by the time she's released.
I'm hoping the author decides to write more stories like this, and have some other scenes like this with a white female enduring an even longer session enlosed in clay while she's being "trained" as a sex slave!
What a hot story! The author deserves a lot of praise for this one! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
avidreader
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Mar 5, 2011 |
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Oh shab not sure how i missed this the first time around but damn man it was hot. Sick, but hey i like that. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
shabbadew2002
(Edit) (Mar 5, 2011)
- Thank you. Appreciate the review...!!
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| Reviewer:
irishman112145
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Aug 12, 2008 |
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This story is great. I am looking forward to reading more. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Chuckdom19
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Aug 11, 2008 |
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The original story is almost hard to read, as it is told in the original "installment" form and is jerky and chopped up. The newer tale is written much better, and is somewhat more realistic. (7/10)
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mkemse
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May 15, 2008 |
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WOW, what a start hope you add more, read a story similar to this years back but it involved a couples i like the idea of 1 couple in this (10/10)
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