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Dream Slave Galleria
Author: rplatz
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(Added on May 14, 2008)
(This month 33233 readers) (Total 58564 readers) |
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Friendly Dolcett inspired fantasy that includes lots of sex, moderate amount of BDSM, a little Gynophagia (cannibalism, specifically woman eating) and themes of slavery. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
littleone_
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Nov 22, 2008 |
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I'm sorry I just couldn't get into it and I really tried. The author did little character development and the plot was very predictable. I've always enjoyed Dolcett themes but this story was no Club X. This story is sort of like eating a protein bar for dinner. It fells you up but doesn't really satisfy. rplatz has talent and when he (or she) can feel his characters I think he can write a first rate story; he has a vivid imagination and a good command of the rules of grammar and the English language. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
rplatz
(Edit) (Nov 22, 2008)
- "a good command of the rules of grammar"
Afraid that credit goes to Microsoft Office.
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| Reviewer:
peachy
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Oct 22, 2008 |
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Awesome, Please keep writing, this is the best story of this theme. Please more!!!
Many thanks
(10/10)
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- Replied by:
rplatz
(Edit) (Oct 23, 2008)
- Thank you. Taking the time to rate my story is really appreciated. This second part is the first of an idea I had. It takes me so long to write I decided to post now instead of waiting to finish the complete train of thought. Hopefully I'll get motivated to write the rest.
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| Reviewer:
gynophagous
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Aug 28, 2008 |
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Exciting and well written.
Love the Dolcettworld milieu. Also that both women and men enjoy playing/eating meat-girls.
Please more! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
ashdurn
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Aug 26, 2008 |
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I loved this story, and wish that more people would rate, and read it. Lived well to be a story in a Dolcett universe, I loved how woman had some rights and freedom, and some were slaves.. It was AMAZINGLY hot, though.. I would have liked to see a little more hints at future incest... Me an my pussy give this story a full swampy puddle of approval . (10/10)
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Polecat
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May 30, 2008 |
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Great piece.
The writing and description are great; the setup also.
I sincerely hope this is not all there is to it.
This calls for sequels (meaning several) (9/10)
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- Replied by:
rplatz
(Edit) (May 30, 2008)
- Thank you very much for taking the time to write your nice comments. The perverted scenario definitely continues in my head but putting it in writing doesn't come easy for me. I'm also not sure there's much interest. 5800 readers and only you and one other e-mail has expressed a desire for a follow up. Ah well... again thanks for rating my story.
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