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Jill
Author: M Eros
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(Added on Apr 9, 2008)
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Thinking he is doing the right thing Jill's father tried to bust his boss for laundering money. Unfortunately, his boss has people inside the police department. Now Jill is taken as retribution and forced into a dark terror filled world. This will be an ongoing story. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
mike uk reader
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Apr 23, 2008 |
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What a great start to this extreme story of young girls predicament thanks to her father.
This dark story of the terrors that await this girl called "Jill" is very well written, with attention to detail and most certainly will have you begging for more unless you are dead.
I just hope now after giving this author my top rating he is only true to his word and keep it ongoing with more terrors and humiliations for this young girl and perhaps also include a very sadistic female into the sexual fun with "Jill".
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Many Thanks For Adding Further Chapters So Quickly. You Have A Marvellous Talent In Presenting My Kind Of Fantasy Fiction. Keep It Up.
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| Reviewer:
kiaralyn
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Apr 17, 2008 |
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Thoroughly enjoyed and anxiously wait for more. Would like to also see more of Jill being forced to tell what we all know she is and to begin to ask/beg for the torture and degradtion (8/10)
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ramses
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Apr 17, 2008 |
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Just the way I like it. (10/10)
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