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The Birthday Present
Author: Freddie Clegg
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(Added on Mar 27, 2008)
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He's decided to buy his girlfriend a birthday present but a trip to the jewellers doesn't quite go as he planned. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Escritor
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Mar 22, 2011 |
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Very nice story, unique and different from all the others, a breath of fresh air. This story could be even better if continued with the sexual adventures of Jacqueline and the narrator (8/10)
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- Replied by:
freddie_clegg
(Edit) (Mar 23, 2011)
- Thanks for the review, I'm glad you enjoyed it - I hadn't looked at this story myself for a while so maybe I'll go back and re-visit the characters some time.
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| Reviewer:
LordIce
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Dec 20, 2008 |
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I loved it! YOu touched on some particular favorites of mine as far as bondage and gags are concerned. I was expecting Jacqueline to end up gagged with her own panties, having the male customer gagged that way was a delicious twist!
My only criticism is the same reflected earlier, about the tape gag. They work in the movies and on television, but not in reality, unless something is packed in the mouth first.
Otherwise, simply delicious! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
freddie_clegg
(Edit) (Dec 21, 2008)
- Well, thanks for the review. If you liked this then "Guns, Bitches & Bling" might be your thing too.
Cheers.
Freddie
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| Reviewer:
sarahbunnyuk
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Jul 27, 2008 |
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I enjoyed it, and being submissive myself, I put myself in the place of Jacqueline, and found it to be nicely erotic, especially the last part having to be tied to the man and having the humiliation of my own tights pulled over my head and face along with the man, gagged with my bra and knickers, tied behind me. My only disappointment would be, having been tied and gagged several times for sex play, I know that you can still be quite noisy with just tape over your mouth, and would have liked to read about more effective gags (as his most definitely would be!), especially as if the situation were real, the robbers would want the best chance of a clean escape, plus from the idea of securing the two of them at the end of the story, I suspect that the robbers would get an erotic frisson from doing that to them, as well as a good laugh!
Thoroughly enjoyed it though, and my rating is an honest one based on the specified criteria of this site, plus I'm adding it to my library favourites. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
freddie_clegg
(Edit) (Jul 27, 2008)
- Thanks for the review, Sarahbunnyuk. I'm glad you liked it and I do take your point on the effectiveness of gags!
You've reminded me that I've got another story in this series that I hadn't posted here yet. Watch out for "Guns, Bitches & Bling" - I'll post it soon.
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Apr 3, 2008 |
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Not a great story, but a very pleasant little one. Realistic, amusing, complete in one chapter; it really deserved to get reviewed before this. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
freddie_clegg
(Edit) (Apr 4, 2008)
- Thanks for your review, Curtis.
Glad you enjoyed it. I guess your reaction is about what I was trying to achieve.
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