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Toy In Training
Author: master-E
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(Added on Mar 22, 2008)
(This month 18070 readers) (Total 30049 readers) |
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He had control of her mother, now it was her turn. A young teenager she had the fear this day would come. Her name was Sue, a teenager with a developing body. Her mother was under masters control for some time, now master felt it was time to play with his new toy. |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Nov 19, 2008 |
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it has the potential of a great story, but it is way to short unless you plan to add more (5/10)
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