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Norway
Author: P.Hepburn
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(Added on Mar 9, 2008)
(This month 16243 readers) (Total 32469 readers) |
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Norway 1940: A female civilian seduces a military leader of the German occupation forces, eventually turning him into her tool to gain power. Bus as the soldier is too paralyzed by her charms, he let things happen and soon he finds himself under the her total tutelage while her girlfriend starts playing with him for fun. What can he do to regain control of his life before he falls too far? And where would he end if he surrender to his seductresses? |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
priscillaolorien
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Jun 20, 2010 |
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great story!
Indeed, I agree, the story can continue a lot further, there is a lot of potential.
I love you writingstyle. Not the vulgar words, but refined describings.
Im really hoping you would like to add some chapters. Great work!
(10/10)
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duchifat
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Sep 1, 2008 |
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i love the story,the way he,and others,slowly fall into the trap of the 2 beautiul ladies charms and domination.
waiting for the nexts.
great...
it cannot be the end.no way,this 2 Ladies just started.let them go on...
thanks for the great femdom story.one of the best, (10/10)
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jpozed
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Jun 30, 2008 |
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This is a wonderful story so far that has the potential to turn into a real epic. Lena and especially Alina are captivating creations and I cannot wait to see what else they have up their sleeves. Very much hope to read more soon. (9/10)
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rockslip
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Mar 19, 2008 |
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Great Story! Very original and well done! I'd love to see more! (10/10)
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MissMoth
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Mar 13, 2008 |
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Ohh, cute! I've always wanted a pet nazi. The premise is delightful in its uniqueness. I think it's a keeper. (8/10)
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trainmanretep
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Mar 11, 2008 |
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It seems to me that English is not the writer's first language because of the high number of errors. If I had to just rate the writing, it would be a 5 or less. What makes this story a 7 is the content. It might help to find an editor or at least use a spell check program that also makes suggestions regarding grammar... I do look forward to the next chapter.
(7/10)
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