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Malevolent Rapture
Author: twisted
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(Added on Feb 29, 2008)
(This month 16133 readers) (Total 36423 readers) |
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just an \"innocent\" strole through the park after dark |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 9, 2009 |
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becareful where you go when the sun goes down, nice story (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
incandescence
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May 20, 2008 |
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This story is marvelous! It is very entertaining and well written. Thank You.. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
shifty
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Mar 8, 2008 |
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I agree with grinner666 on the victim being turned on too easily. It's distracting in an otherwise feasible scenario. I hope you can make it long though, keep it up! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
grinner666
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Mar 6, 2008 |
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Very hot, but the author needs to learn some basic rules of grammar and spelling. Also the victim is turned on far too easily by things that should only HURT the first time. Doesn't work for me. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
fellatrix
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Mar 3, 2008 |
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Violent, sadistic, sexy. Not much characterisation but pretty well-described actions. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
~twisted~
(Edit) (Mar 3, 2008)
- thank you, i hope you enjoy the rest of it as well... i tryed to get more feelin in the characters as i went along, this was just the initial, raw fantasy that started the idea for the story itself... ~twisted~
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