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Danielle\'s Punishment
Author: Saucie
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(Added on Feb 11, 2008)
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Danielle\'s school has decided to try a new method for keeping the students in line, and Danielle is the first to be punished. Inspired by Writings of Leviticus. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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Riptide
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Oct 10, 2011 |
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Very well written. I Would like a little more detail however, it ended abrubtly. (7/10)
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Falcon
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Apr 20, 2008 |
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Excellent humiliation story! Good buildup with zest added by Danielle's attempt to flee her fate. Exposition of her feelings is good. Liked the fact that English teacher played key role. Would like to see more stories from this author. Maybe a Part 2 where the English teacher leads the class in a discussion about their feelings on viewing Danielle's private parts. (10/10)
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usnpilot
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Mar 24, 2008 |
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We need more chapters (9/10)
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dirtypanty_slut
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Feb 22, 2008 |
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Very well written, would like even more description of her feelings of humiliation, and of her exposed parts (9/10)
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Undine
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Feb 21, 2008 |
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Humiliation for humiliation's sake on an nc victim--with great build up. This is close to perfection for me. (9/10)
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mike uk reader
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Feb 19, 2008 |
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This story is very well written from a excellent new author to the BDSM library site.
I just love the humiliation of naughty young school girls to the extreme. Lets have more chapters from you soon. (10/10)
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chksng19
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Feb 16, 2008 |
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Hot, hot story, well-written and fun. Hope there is a lot more. Peter Leviticus would be proud! (9/10)
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ArinAltra
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Feb 15, 2008 |
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Great start! I cant wait for part two! (9/10)
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Curtis
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Feb 15, 2008 |
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If this is what you think about in your jumpseat, I hope you have many more boring flights. I'm a big fan of the 'naked in school' type of story from Leviticus's site, so I'm hoping you'll continue this. I suspect this is one of your first stories, based on how stilted the prose is. With practice you'll get smoother. Good spelling, punctuation, grammar, so you're already ahead of the game. (7/10)
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Derelict
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Feb 14, 2008 |
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This is a great start to a humiliation tale! Excellent detail so far! I hope this story focuses more on bondage and humiliation but stays away from sex with teachers/students, but that's just me. In any case, you've definitely got me wanting to see what's under that skirt! ;) (9/10)
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igachu80
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Feb 13, 2008 |
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I like the humiliation, which you do a great job of describing. Of course, I would expect the next punishment to be even worse! (8/10)
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mkemse
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Feb 13, 2008 |
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real nice start can't waitfor more (9/10)
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