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Secretary Bondage
Author: stHell66
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(Added on Feb 7, 2008)
(This month 25367 readers) (Total 59677 readers) |
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dirtier version of \"the secretary\", about a self-lofting girl getting a job with her cousin |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (4.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
copper thorn
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Feb 19, 2008 |
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I liked this story. Please keep writing. (9/10)
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subMichelle
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Feb 11, 2008 |
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While the story content was interesting, the grammer and text message shortcuts made this story an unfortunate posting. Save yourself the time and read something legible. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
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Feb 11, 2008 |
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While I respect the reviews of others, especially Chksng19, I have to heartily disagree with him. This was not an example of "lousy grammar skills". It was an example of pure laziness on the part of this author. A spell check is not difficult and neither is looking up words in the dictionary. I am offended as a reader and as an author. At least run your story through a spell check program before you submit it - and try editing...one time, at least! (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Feb 10, 2008 |
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A fine idea, but lousy grammar skills make the story hard to read. For instance, in your introduction, what is a self-lofting girl? Does that mean she can lift herself off the ground? Try fixing the errors with the help of an editor, and your score will be fixed (3/10)
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masterdw
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Feb 9, 2008 |
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You have a good imagination and ideas, but you write like a 3rd grader (4/10)
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mkemse
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Feb 9, 2008 |
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was intersting to read (7/10)
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