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The humiliating training of Emma
Author: Emma No knickers
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(Added on Jul 31, 2000)
(This month 138874 readers) (Total 297064 readers) |
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A grown woman is humiliated beyond belief by her best friend's teenage boyfriend and finds she craves more. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Sojurboy
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Oct 20, 2010 |
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The school system today is sorely lacking in teaching skills. I suspect that this writer's English teacher could not have passed a competency test. How unfortunate, since the concept was good. The diction and spelling was that of a poorly schooled 7th grader. Might have been 2cd Form, using the English public school system. I blame the school system, because this writer did her all in writing this story. If she had had a competent editor, this story might very well have been a No. 1 tale. Thanks for a real try, and hang in there. You will learn, because it is obvious that you have the cerebral horse-power!!! (5/10)
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angel{HM}
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Mar 23, 2007 |
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I really liked the rhythm of this story. Kept me interested and wanting more.
When I read part one, I found it hard to break up and take in the story, due to not inserting paragraphs and correctly using speech marks.
As I read parts two, three and four, the story picked up and amazed me. With a little self correction and care, it is amazing how much better a story can be read and understood.
I could really feel her humiliation. Well done. (7/10)
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toby0821
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Feb 23, 2006 |
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I really liked this story, it is very well written. I know a few ladies that need to be taken down a peg or two in this manner. (8/10)
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jip
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Feb 14, 2006 |
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Exiting story (7/10)
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oldwino
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Nov 5, 2005 |
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great spanking and public humiliation storey. Ended to soon. My gf loved it. Would like to read more of forced public nudity and sucking young teen cocks and punished for being a whore. (10/10)
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luka
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Sep 22, 2005 |
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I missed Carl in your followup ^^...wonderful story. I think I liked the 3rd and 4th chapter even more than the first 2. (10/10)
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BigCat
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Aug 27, 2005 |
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So well done. Great stuuf. One of the all-time best. (10/10)
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rhmusic
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Mar 20, 2005 |
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Love the beginning - especially the "I'm getting in over my head" feeling. Reminds me very much of CowGirl's stories. (8/10)
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mkemse
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Aug 14, 2004 |
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hot, hot hot, hope ther are more chapters to cum
This is the type of storty that should never end (8/10)
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gillian
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Nov 8, 2003 |
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I hope there are more chapters to come. (8/10)
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woolfighter
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Nov 6, 2003 |
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If I could rate it 20, I would do. It is between the most erotic story I've read, especially the first part. (10/10)
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jbowler65
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Sep 2, 2003 |
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Interesting premise, but very difficult to read at first due to the lack of paragraphs. The story starts off slow, but gradually picks up steam by part 4. A rewrite of earlier parts and a continuation of the story should be good for the story. (5/10)
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don11
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Apr 15, 2003 |
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I've now read all of Emma's stories.
They are ubiquitously good, all in the niche she has created for herself.
Perhaps the ultimate compliment is that I know begin to understand the fetish that Emma writes about. A case of delighting in the instruction.
This would have got 9 or 10 if it had been paragraphed from the start.
(8/10)
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emmaadmirer
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Jan 17, 2003 |
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part 4 was the hottest one, the best I ever read!!! I pray, that you will write more for us. (10/10)
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jmfm1
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Dec 3, 2002 |
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Very good, there is a little sex but the history hs a good rythim, continue it (9/10)
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Barbara Anne
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Oct 27, 2002 |
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I found the storyline predictable and generally, as it progressed, a rehash of earlier material. It needed more attention to desciptive detail and less emphasis on reliving experiences in slightly different situations. Use your imagination to create more challenging situations? (7/10)
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Svkeulen
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Apr 1, 2002 |
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I read this wonderfull story only to notice that at the end I would like to continu to read more.
Keep up the good work. (8/10)
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eberg
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Dec 19, 2001 |
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ok (10/10)
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Silverfish
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Apr 12, 2001 |
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Part one is quite dull a boring. It seems to be the typical everyday average spanking story. Nothing very original. There is however, some forshadowing by calling Emma a naughty little school girl. The seemingly forshadowed event never really comes to pass.
Part two is just a continuation of part one. More nromal everyday spanking, with some mild humilation thrown in. There are two redeeming points which include a schooluniform Emma is made to wear, and the shaving of her nether regions.
Throughout both part one and two there seem to be no porper divisions into tangible paragraphs and it is EXTREMELY detrimental to the story. You frequently loose your place. Lucky from Part Three on paragraphs miraculously appear.
Part three doesn't serve any purpose except to introduce the character of 'mum', and as such is very short.
Part four is arguable the best part of the story. It contains very good humilation in both changing-room scenes with 'mom', although the final one is the high point of the story. This high point almost makes the story worth reading... almost. The remained of this section is unbelievable and unrealistic.
If there was more to this story it might rate a better mark. (4/10)
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journeyman |
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Mar 28, 2001 |
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excellent especially parts 1 and 2 (10/10)
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Sue |
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Feb 11, 2001 |
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excellent story. looking foeward for next chapter.
I'm so horny I can't keep my fingers away from my pussy. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
SueSue |
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Nov 20, 2000 |
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The first two parts were much better than parts three and four. Bringing the teenage boy's mother and neighbor into it bored me. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
beta |
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Nov 15, 2000 |
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A wonderfully erotic story. Submitting to a younger person, especially another female, is especially humiliating. Would love to see younger females who know her get some humiliating revenge, and a few good laughs. Good writing! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
william |
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Nov 7, 2000 |
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I hope this is just the beginning. Very arousing story told in first person. Author Emma claims this story is true. If so,what an amazing person! Thank you for sharing. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Frank |
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Nov 7, 2000 |
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Wonderful, thank you (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Painfully_Yours |
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Nov 3, 2000 |
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I don't know why, but i really like this story. I'm not really in to spanking, but something
about this one is a turn on. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
jzzmn |
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Oct 24, 2000 |
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Good story. However, I felt that the reason for her submitting (might as well try everything once) was kind of weak and unconvincing. I would have rather seen her forced or blackmailed. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Heinz Amler |
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Sep 25, 2000 |
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Great story, hope it will be continued, more of it.
(9/10)
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| Reviewer:
quickster |
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Sep 16, 2000 |
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nice story, lots of potential
I suggest she be giving more menial tasks to preform (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Geekman |
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Sep 10, 2000 |
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This is a good story about a girl loving to be told what to do and enjoy being spanked.
How about having her walk to the pub in a white shirt and skirt (without undies) and then spill a tray of drinks on her. Have her walk home waring the wet clothes showing her body to everyone. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
dapper dade |
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Sep 9, 2000 |
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more humuliation please (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
bpccrsb |
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Sep 3, 2000 |
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looking forward to rest of story (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
MrB |
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Aug 11, 2000 |
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I am looking forward to the rest of this storry! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
button |
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Aug 4, 2000 |
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not bad, more variety in humiliation perhaps needed (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Simon K |
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Aug 3, 2000 |
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I don,t know wether it is true but it sounded convincing to me I loved it! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
nil |
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Aug 3, 2000 |
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not to hard (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mark |
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Aug 1, 2000 |
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The story is arousing and imaginative. There are some spelling errors. I look forward to the rest of Emma's saga (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
kay |
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Aug 1, 2000 |
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fantastic story (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
FRANK GIBBSON |
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Aug 1, 2000 |
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just luv humulation by younger to older (8/10)
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