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The Perils of Patricia
Author: Petricia
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(Added on Jan 11, 2008)
(This month 64198 readers) (Total 112976 readers) |
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A submissive housewife submits to her young Mistress for the first time. |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Martiniman
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Jan 28, 2012 |
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This is such a wonderful story, tainted only by the fact that it ends on the first morning & no further chapters were added. Very frustrating to get into a good story to find it just stops. Especially frustrating to see the author wrote several stories after this one, yet never came back to finish this story. This story was so good it deserves to be finished. Petricia, if you're still out there please consider finishing this story! (9/10)
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Dryhill
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Mar 16, 2010 |
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Yes the locker/key section was a little long but it did show the sub moving deeper into her submission. A great story, well written and full of promise for more to come.
So come on stop keeping us waiting?
(10/10)
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JimmyJump
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Dec 21, 2008 |
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Well-crafted and über-erotic. Great stuff.
JJ (10/10)
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MasterBaron1945
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Dec 17, 2008 |
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I enjoy the evolution of the story
I also like the degradation of her without being vulgar or going too far.
Wonderfully done (9/10)
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bungee952
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Dec 14, 2008 |
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Wow cant wait for more of the same (10/10)
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DaveAM
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Dec 14, 2008 |
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Loved the story. The teasing tension in the train station was incredible. When at the end he had to beg Amber and to please her her humiliation was complete. Hope to be albe to read more of your writing. Thanks.
(10/10)
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Boundtowrite
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May 20, 2008 |
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Petricia, perhaps you are right concerning the slow moving. However, this story doesn't bore at all, not for a second. Quite the opposite is true: most enjoyable to read, extremely exciting, stimulating my imagination.
The slow build of the first chapter in fact adds to the suspense, the oncoming surrender of the sub. Nice written conversations and a nice view of the submissives mind to.
Love that wonderfull combination of domination, wicked, humiliating ideas combined with the obvious care for her "victim" of the top.
Would love to read more from you, I keep re-reading this one for sure. A-plus. (10/10)
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FootSlaveE
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Mar 1, 2008 |
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Wow. Great story. I can't wait for additional chapters. I especially like the way you deal with the sub's psychological turmoil. Very hot. (9/10)
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CrazyMe
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Feb 27, 2008 |
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Very enjoyable writing, and I certainly hope more will come.
The breadcrum-trail of keys was a little long and the reason why it only got 9 stars... (9/10)
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- Replied by:
petricia
(Edit) (Feb 27, 2008)
- thankyou, in retrospect I am not at all happy with it. Entirely too slow moving. I was trying to create a sequence of events which gradually took her deeper each time, but feel I didn't do it very well.
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Master Equinox
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Feb 17, 2008 |
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The story took my imagination and produced the visual images that I expect when reading a good book. The feelings of the sub can be felt when reading the excellent communication from the dom. I am looking forward to the next chapter. (10/10)
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sub_for_you
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Feb 9, 2008 |
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Very well done! It is fresh too, not just the same ideas recycled. And I love the way only women seem to write about f/f sex and love (sorry guys). Makes me want to be a character in the story! Please give us more. (9/10)
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zakaluka
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Feb 7, 2008 |
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Absolutely fantastic. Hopefully, you'll be writing more on this. As others have said, feels like a professional. (9/10)
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ferricsmith
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Jan 16, 2008 |
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1st story?! Even from just this one part, you sound like a pro. Great beginning to this story, and to hopefully many more stories. Really, this is terrific work. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Lisa Jones
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Jan 13, 2008 |
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More, more, more...
How teasing of you to stop just as the action starts! I do hope this is the first chapter of many. (10/10)
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Nike Brooks
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Jan 12, 2008 |
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The story content turns me on. It is well composed and has the right size. I ennjoyed it very much and long for more. (9/10)
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