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Auntie's Household Maid
Author: total_amateur
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(Added on Jan 11, 2008)
(This month 66552 readers) (Total 116120 readers) |
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The story of the everyday eventful life of a boy turned into a French maid by his cruel aunt. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
Rating:  (6.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
dontmindme
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Aug 12, 2012 |
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I can't quite put into words why I like this story so much. It really needs a clean-up, but has some good ideas. I thought the first person perspective gave the character a personality, which is a huge plus.
Maybe find a proofreader and write another femdom story. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
kinkcrazy
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Jul 23, 2008 |
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Not great grammatically but it has good ideas. Needs some cleaning up (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
dmat102
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Apr 26, 2008 |
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cool story please write more (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
masterdw
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Jan 31, 2008 |
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You have some decent ideas but your writing is really bad. Is Engish your native language? (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Kitty Trainer
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Jan 24, 2008 |
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"*whack x9 really fast"
Nuff said. (2/10)
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