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Spanked: Master's Version
Author: Cum Girl
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(Added on Dec 30, 2007)
(This month 9848 readers) (Total 15597 readers) |
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Tied, spread and spanked; what better way could there be to spend an evening in ? |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
ShyGreenEyedGrl
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Feb 2, 2008 |
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Another wonderful additon....i really enjoy reading about the two of you. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Cum Girl
(Edit) (Feb 8, 2008)
- Thank you again ShyGreenEyedGrl.
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 3, 2008 |
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good story, good detail good flow, nice job (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Cum Girl
(Edit) (Jan 3, 2008)
- Thank you very much mkemse, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Cum Girl
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| Reviewer:
hotblackchick
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Dec 31, 2007 |
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This story is very well written with attention to detail, plot, and character development. What I enjoyed the most here was the time the author spent detailing not only the physical aspects of character interaction, but also the emotional reactions and intended effects and outcomes desired. It is rare to see an author truly able to grasp and communicate these types of interactions on this level. I would like to see a longer story built around these two characters with more opportunity to see the complexity of their bond through a variety of scenes and situations. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Cum Girl
(Edit) (Dec 31, 2007)
- Thank you very much hotblackchick for your kind review of my story. I am very pleased you enjoyed it. Master and Cum Girl are not characters; they are my Master and me. There are another 9 stories on the site that detail some of the aspects of our relationship and I hope you have the chance to read them. Hopefully they will show in more detail the complexity of our bond. Thanks again for reviewing the story, I very much appreciate it.
Cum Girl
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