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Weighed
Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
Rating:  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
kimmi
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Dec 14, 2007 |
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Loved the subject matter...hated how it was presented. The intentonal gramatical deviation only made it harder to read.
Way too short, no story development (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Dec 11, 2007 |
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Okay. Mistakes happen. Even grammatical ones. I am not here to pretend to be lecturing an English Faculty, especially when the errors are so minute that crying havoc and chopping in half the potential of ten points, seems a tad over the top. But to each his/her own, I guess.
I liked the story very, very much. For the plain and simple reason that it is very well written, highly erotic and thus thouroughly enjoyable.
Story has the right balance between being impersonal and distant and being completely involved. Hard to do when the subject speaks of events happening to oneself.
My only negative has nothing to do with content or execution, but with my penchant to favour longer stories.
A well deserved niner, with a certain tenner if more would/should be added...
Looking forward to further concoctions flowing from your (electronic or not) pen, Animal_Trainer.
JJ (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
CoughDrop
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Dec 10, 2007 |
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Carry on! But, please, try to find a someone to act as sub ed for you. Hike up the grammar, extend your submission length, and you'll be heading in the right direction. All else aside, KEEP GOING! The first story is always a great learning experience. (5/10)
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