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Female warden + male prisoners = forced fellatio
Author: Aceith
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(Added on Dec 6, 2007)
(This month 62017 readers) (Total 103340 readers) |
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And another poor male is victimized by cruel women....will it never end? It's a dirty job but somebody has to do it. Falsely accused of a serious crime while passing through an isolated Southern Town, an unfortunate male finds that there is no justice here....... only something deeply repulsive and insidious. The phrase "You said a mouthful" Takes a whole new meaning here. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
sub_for_you
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Dec 14, 2007 |
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This rating is mostly for the erotic elements rather than writing style. There are many things I probably could point out about the writing structure and approach, but that would be better left for an email. The erotic premise happens to tweak a particular fantasy of mine, and that is that of males being forced (or maybe not so forced) into sucking cocks and swallowing cum. I mean, if it's expected of us so readily, why not of males. I guess what I'm saying is that it would give them perspective, you know, what's good for the goose ...
The other thing the author gets a lot of points for is describing the older female authority figures as attractive, even into their 50s. I've seen some damned sexy older women, some that I'd like to take advantage of me (or me of them!).
So anywho, what I'd like to see is some sexual or punishment interaction between these authority figures and the male victim. I'm squirming in anticipation. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
jrnd711
(Edit) (Apr 28, 2008)
- Thanks for your reply. I'm glad there are elements in the story that you can enjoy, and I hope to give more of the same in future episodes. Older women are hotter, in some respects, than younger women, when it comes to interacting in this kind of fantasy. Experience, I think, is the best 'nastifier'. Hope you enjoy coming additions. Aceith
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| Reviewer:
oralist
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Dec 7, 2007 |
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awonderful start to a great story please write fast (9/10)
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- Replied by:
jrnd711
(Edit) (Apr 28, 2008)
- Thank you very much for your complement. I feel that this is a unique area that has not been fully explored. Aceith
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