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Caught in the Act
Author: Tina Allison
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(Added on Oct 25, 2007)
(This month 9037 readers) (Total 23640 readers) |
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This is a very interesting story I hope you like it. If you have any comments please feel free to e-mail me. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Rocky
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Oct 29, 2007 |
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Okay, now that I've looked at it again, it appears the same formatting monster that attacked one of my own works has decided to come out of the closet. The story still makes no sense to me...bits and pieces, because as another reviewer mentioned, many of the words are missing.
I'd suggest resubmiting it in another format and see what happens. In the meantime, I've adjusted my score from a 1 to a 5 (just because it MIGHT havr promise), and deleted my orignal narrative review. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
diem
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Oct 28, 2007 |
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interesting start. Is more to follow? (6/10)
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DeGrinch
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Oct 26, 2007 |
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I don't know if it was the author or the site but the story didn't display well at all(the front part of each line was cut off). From what I could see it was well written though. (6/10)
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