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Boss Lady
Author: Euryleia Rider
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(Added on Sep 13, 2007)
(This month 66741 readers) (Total 134315 readers) |
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An innocent is turned into an obedient toy for her boss. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Martiniman
(Edit) |
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Dec 23, 2011 |
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Fabulous story & I always enjoy those stories ending in happiness & love! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Euryleia
(Edit) (Dec 26, 2011)
- I'm very glad you enjoyed it!
- Replied by:
Euryleia
(Edit) (Dec 26, 2011)
- Thanks for the review--I'm glad you enjoyed the story!
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Oct 22, 2007 |
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WOW, need i say more (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Euryleia
(Edit) (Oct 22, 2007)
- Thank you so much for the WOW!
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| Reviewer:
Satan_Klaus
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Oct 13, 2007 |
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I liked this piece very much. Unfortunately I seem to be unable to point out just what really makes it great so lets just say that the 'flow' is right.
I want to add a little criticism as well because that should be part of any review:
1) I didn't quite get the part in the mens clothing store(chapter six). Maybe it's just not my fetish but I think that dressing a woman like a man is in no way as humiliating as dressing a man like a woman and so this part seemed superfluous.
2) Classy, rich dominans from a daydream don't use hotmail accounts (chapter 7). They use cards embossed in gold lettering printed just for a single occasion! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Euryleia
(Edit) (Oct 13, 2007)
- Thanks for the feedback, Satan. I was experimenting to see if cross dressing worked for women as well. Oh, well. Live and learn. ;)
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| Reviewer:
kisha1
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Oct 13, 2007 |
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Well written story, the writer captured the growing relationship between Domme and sub perfectly. Look forward to reading more from author. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Euryleia
(Edit) (Oct 13, 2007)
- Thank you so much for the review. I'm hoping to have something new out for Halloween.
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| Reviewer:
subterfuge
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Oct 10, 2007 |
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My favorite story in a long time. I'm always a sucker for a nice love story between dominant and submissive women and it's a real pleasure to find a good one. I thought this was well written and well paced. Hopefully there will be many more to come. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Euryleia
(Edit) (Oct 11, 2007)
- Thank you so much for a lovely review. I really appreciate you letting me know that you enjoyed the story.
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| Reviewer:
steph2004ster
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Oct 2, 2007 |
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gyrl loved the story and juiced very much. Maybe an nc piercing or tattooing or branding for the icing on the cake. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Euryleia
(Edit) (Oct 2, 2007)
- I'm glad you enjoyed it and I appreciate you reviewing it.
I'll keep those suggestions in mind for the next tale. ;)
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| Reviewer:
Coday
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Oct 1, 2007 |
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Very nice story. I loved reading the first parts.
I hope many parts will be added. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Euryleia
(Edit) (Oct 2, 2007)
- Thank you. I've posted a corection to part 6 but, I'm afraid to say, that part 7 is the conclusion.
- Replied by:
JimmyJump
(Edit) (Oct 2, 2007)
- Well, if it's a 250-pages chapter, there's no problem...
JJ
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Oct 1, 2007 |
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I'm a tad mystified here, because to me, the first two chapters are a bit of a mess, with the storyline seeking ways to find a decent plot, together with some parts looking like this was a draft that still needed some editing (blue notes as a 'reminder' of having to add a certain state of mind, bold and underlined text where the tale gets a wee bit dodgy, etc. ...)
If it hadn't been for knowing who wrote this story, I'd probably rated it poorly, according to my 'judgment' at the time (such a heavy word, judgment).
But I decided to wait, because I couldn't imagine why a talent like Euryleia Rider all of a sudden started to write like a complete beginner...
And I was right, since everything fell into place right from the start of chapter 3, where the subtle style and characterization that is so typical for Euryleia Rider, again starts to blossom...
I still feel that the first 2 chapters are an overly shoddy prelude to the main story, and probably could be done away with anyway. Maybe something went wrong in uploading the story to the site (like in choosing the wrong files) but fact is that now, the story is set on the right tracks, veering again towards stellar...
Knowing where this comes from, a nice 9, regardless of the shaky start.
JJ (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Euryleia
(Edit) (Oct 1, 2007)
- I really appreciate you sticking with story and I'm very glad that you rated it as high as you did.
Your sort of feedback helps me in becoming a better writer. Thank you.
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JimmyJump
(Edit) (Oct 1, 2007)
- I've read the added chapters, and now things make more sense, as there's large chunks added in between.
I think a lot has to do with updates being made in the wrong order, or something, because now, contrary to 2 weeks ago, I have suddenly way more text in-between chapter three and what was chapter 4 (which now is chapter 5).
Though, for some strange reason, there's again these underlined parts at the start of chapter 6.
As far as making you a better writer goes; I wouldn't dare to but even imagine such. It is not my ambition, nor my place. I can only put forward my feelings about the story and the way it was/is written...
You obviously have the talent, so I think it's just the skill that needs sharpening. But that's something that will grow automatically, without the help of a third party.
Only thing *I* would *never* do, is write to the taste of whatever public. You are the writer; you lead the way. We'll follow...
JJ
- Replied by:
Euryleia
(Edit) (Oct 3, 2007)
- The underlines are weird--they're definitely not in what I sent for posting. I'll try and contact Torq to resolve that. Thanks for letting me know.
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| Reviewer:
kikkk
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Sep 21, 2007 |
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As always you deliver top quality. All I can say is thank you for your awesome work.
(10/10)
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- Replied by:
Euryleia
(Edit) (Sep 21, 2007)
- Thank you so very much.
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| Reviewer:
freddie_clegg
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Sep 17, 2007 |
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I love the way Amy reacts in spite of herself, knowing that every move can only make life more dificult for herself but driven on by her need to respond to Vivian.
Excellent! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Euryleia
(Edit) (Sep 17, 2007)
- Thank you for your review. I'm glad you're enjoying Amy's progression.
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| Reviewer:
FlameDesire
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Sep 16, 2007 |
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Wonderful write! Personally, it's better than your last one with the dog. This one is shorter, but definitely hot...really, really hot. Love it as much as the first one, but that one just has a bit more hotness in some parts, lol.
Looking forward to more of your writing ^^
Thanks for giving me a wonderful story to get off on. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Euryleia
(Edit) (Sep 16, 2007)
- I really appreciate your review. The final version is longer than 'Going to the Dogs' but its been slow getting posted.
- Replied by:
FlameDesire
(Edit) (Sep 22, 2007)
- Ah, alright. Just finished reading the last few chapters and definitely refreshing the page a lot for updates. Loving it so far =)
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| Reviewer:
qwerty1999
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Sep 16, 2007 |
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Well written and somewhat believable. I look forward to more from the author. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Euryleia
(Edit) (Sep 16, 2007)
- Thank you. The next chapters should be up soon.
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| Reviewer:
rilawild
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Sep 15, 2007 |
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I really liked this story and look forward to future chapter. Like the others I like the slow build up, but for me I would have liked even more slow teasing of the shy lawyer before her submission and perhaps a bit more about her feelings. However, that's my preference. The story itself is well written and very erotic. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Euryleia
(Edit) (Sep 15, 2007)
- Thank you for the feedback. I didn't want to lose readers by starting too slow but I see how I need to include more of Amy's feelings in the other chapters.
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| Reviewer:
GwaiLo
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Sep 14, 2007 |
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I really enjoyed the tempo of the first chapter Euryleia. I thought you handled it fantastically and it ended up being very erotic. Keep it up! :-) (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Euryleia
(Edit) (Sep 14, 2007)
- Thank you so much for the review. I'm glad you found it as erotic to read as I did to write.
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| Reviewer:
Kev
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Sep 13, 2007 |
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This is really good. I like the slow start and I hope that the slow tempo will continue. For me I would love if the humiliation continued with the way she dresses for work. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Euryleia
(Edit) (Sep 14, 2007)
- Thanks, Kev, for the feedback. I'll keep that in mind. <bg>
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