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Julie
Author: Excalibur
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(Added on Jul 21, 2007)
(This month 10064 readers) (Total 16937 readers) |
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Julies first steps into the world of D/s |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
smilie
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Jul 24, 2007 |
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written in a way that i realy felt her feelings i understand how she felt and how lost she was (9/10)
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Aussiegirl1
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Jul 22, 2007 |
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Well done. I liked the way you set up her background and the sense of anticipation was very real. The way you didn't tell us anything about the Master, even what he looked like, added a feeling of mystery. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Jul 21, 2007 |
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Well written with a depth of emotional interplay that surpasses the mere physical. Dare we call it a romance? (9/10)
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rce
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Jul 21, 2007 |
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A good story, well written. The downside was that the story as such was far from unique. (8/10)
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