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Tied Up
Author: Cum Girl
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(Added on Jun 26, 2007)
(This month 10458 readers) (Total 21305 readers) |
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Cum Girl confesses her desire for rope & the outdoors. Master makes her dreams come true. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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Rating:  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Crowheart
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Jun 28, 2007 |
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I loved your tale; you must be very lucky to have such a caring and loving master :-)
The use of the "&"s sometimes disturbs the flow of the text; perhaps it would be better if you write out the word "and" instead?
Well... keep the good work up - I'd really like to read more! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
cum girl
(Edit) (Jun 28, 2007)
- Thank you Crowheart. Master has instructed me to apologise for the use of the "&"s; it was laziness on Cum Girl's part. I am going to edit and repost the story with them removed. Master looks after me very well and I am devoted to him. I am working on my next tale but it is hard work at the moment.
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chksng19
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Jun 27, 2007 |
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A delightful tale, well told but for one concern. Ampersands (&) should not be used as words at the beginnings of sentences! It is ok, now and again, to put one in the middle of them, but never as substitute for the first word.
Your style is simple and beautiful in the telling. My Rose is as beautiful, our play is as loving. You are fortunate indeed, Cum Girl. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
cum girl
(Edit) (Jun 27, 2007)
- Thank you very much for your review chksng19. I will try to make sure that I avoid using Ampersands to begin sentences. I wrote the story for Master so that he would have a permanent record of that evening. He loved the story which was reward enough for Cum Girl. To receive praise from a stranger has made Cum Girl very proud.
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| Reviewer:
ThisYouWillDo
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Jun 27, 2007 |
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A very entertaining and enjoyable story. Well-written - kept me reading right up to the end. Thanks, cumgirl
TYWD (8/10)
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- Replied by:
cum girl
(Edit) (Jun 27, 2007)
- Thank you for your review ThisYouWillDo. I am very pleased that you enjoyed it & that it kept you hooked to the end. Cum Girl
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