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Disposal By Degrees.
Author: Susan Karlson
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(Added on Jun 15, 2007)
(This month 31208 readers) (Total 55728 readers) |
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The Group do not want their hostages to talk....ever. Greta is delighted. She and the Boys can have some serious fun.... |
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| Reviewer:
mike uk reader
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Jun 16, 2007 |
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Just when I had given up all hope of another "Susan Karlson" story one appears as if by magic, one year and three months from her last posted story.
Once again like her 3 other stories presented in the BDSM library quite simply without any doubt excellently written and with attention to extreme detail. Not for the faint-hearted.
I had the biief pleasure of corresponding with Susan over the web by e-mail and can assure reviewer (chksng19) that she is indeed a female living in my part of the world here in the UK.
Susan would love to post stories more often unfortunately like myself she is a little past her prime and unfortunatly unable to publish them very quickly these days.
I personally wish her well and my gratitude for posting this story here in full without waiting months for other parts. Will continue looking out for more in the future in hope. You are the Queen in my eyes. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
susankarl
(Edit) (Jun 19, 2007)
- Thank you kindly, Sir.
Nice to hear from you again.
Susan.
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Jun 16, 2007 |
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Hard to believe this story was written by a woman. I'd like to meet you sometime!
Very brutal, harsh and evil; this is a tale among the roughest here. A few attentions to the details of grammar and such, as heycarrieanne suggests, and this one could be a 10. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
susankarl
(Edit) (Jun 19, 2007)
- Thankyou for the review.
I am quite sure if we ever did meet, we would find it virtually impossible to communicate about the sort of rubbish I gleefully write. These stories are secret dirty dreams, acts of violence framed in a fiction to make them describable. Given a guarantee of total immunity from any reprisal and provided with all the amenities written about in this story, I would do absolutely nothing except set everyone free.
Perhaps my only real desire would be to find out if the old tale of how good our coloured friends are in bed is really true, but at my age, even that is wishful thinking.
Susan.
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heycarrieanne
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Jun 15, 2007 |
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I had no clue how to score this story! The fact that the author makes every sentence its own paragraph makes the story impossible to read! If English isn't your first language, then this might be understandable; otherwise the author needs to read up on what constitutes a paragraph. Corrected I might could get past the first page and give it a higher score! (5/10)
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- Replied by:
susankarl
(Edit) (Jun 19, 2007)
- "I might could get past " ?
You obviously like long blocks of text. For a fun story made to be read quickly, and with no pretensions at all of being worthy of merit other than by giving pleasure to others who share my perversion, my tales do not attempt to be grammatical masterpieces. I think one who writes as badly as you,( see my quote above ),should perhaps think twice before complaining about others.
Your third sentence was written to "your" then veered to "the author". Perhaps English is not your strong point, my dear.
Thank you for taking the time to comment, though. We hacks appreciate a word or two, even if not always complimentary.
Susan.
- Replied by:
susankarl
(Edit) (Jun 19, 2007)
- A small P.S.
I have just looked at my story.
Unfortunately, virtually every sentence is started with words on two different margins, which does make it look awfully "bitty".
When sent, all lines started at the left without the formatting that has been used. I do now see what you mean. It does make it jumpy to read. Sorry about that, but it was not my format that was used. Susan.
- Replied by:
susankarl
(Edit) (Jun 19, 2007)
- A small P.S.
I have just looked at my story.
Unfortunately, virtually every sentence is started with words on two different margins, which does make it look awfully "bitty".
When sent, all lines started at the left without the formatting that has been used. I do now see what you mean. It does make it jumpy to read. Sorry about that, but it was not my format that was used. Susan.
- Replied by:
heycarrieanne
(Edit) (Jun 22, 2007)
- It is correct English language to say: Corrected I might could get past the first page and give it a higher score. That sentence means that I could not read beyond the first page; page meaning here the text that appears in the computer screen. But I see in your later comments that it was a formatting issue ... hmmmmmmmmmm
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