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Educated at the Mall
Author: mainesubbie
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(Added on Jun 2, 2007)
(This month 9223 readers) (Total 19919 readers) |
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the girl is taught who is in charge at all times. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
mrfaja01
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Apr 25, 2008 |
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Reminds me of trips to the mall with m x gf. Where's the sequel (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
ElectricBadger
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Jun 4, 2007 |
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Good start to a work; has a nice story and some exciting scenarios, but needs some work technically. Break down some of the paragraphs and run on sentences, focus on some more detail (rather than an account of what's going on) and it'll be a really terrific piece. (6/10)
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