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Sex Slave Sisters
Author: taskmaster11
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(Added on May 31, 2007)
(This month 54369 readers) (Total 111615 readers) |
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Three not so ugly but bullying sisters are finally brought to book by a vengeful relative and trained to lead a life of submission and slavery |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Piers
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Aug 17, 2007 |
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I'm ready for th enext installment! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jaymin
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Jun 7, 2007 |
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Very nice start to the story and one that I feel has a good bit of potential. I hope that we get to read parts 2 and further on as I know I will be looking forward to new installments of this story. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
johhny
(Edit) (Jun 7, 2007)
- many thanks, hope I dont dissapoint!
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| Reviewer:
Rocky
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Jun 1, 2007 |
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The numerous grammar and spelling errors really did it in for me. Spell checkers certainly work for what they're designed to do, but won't pick up things like using "like" when you mean "life," and don't know the difference between "to" and "too." Try proofreading and editing it, and I'll consider a higher rating. The story has potential. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
johhny
(Edit) (Jun 4, 2007)
- Quite right, I shall take that one on the chin.
I was in too much of a hurry to get away for the week and should have left the story until I returned.
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| Reviewer:
uxygq
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Jun 1, 2007 |
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Good story, looking forward to part 2. (7/10)
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