|
|
|
|
|
Hole
Author: Snark
|
| |
(Added on May 31, 2007)
(This month 48071 readers) (Total 76654 readers) |
| |
A slave's continuing discovery about herself, her owner and their relationship. |
| Ratings and Reviews: |
| Number
of Ratings: 7 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
| 1 |
2 |
3 |
4 |
5 |
6 |
7 |
8 |
9 |
10 |
| 0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
14% |
0% |
57% |
29% |
|
Weighed
Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9/10) |
Highest
Rating:  (10/10) |
Lowest
Rating:  (7/10) |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
nassim
(Edit) |
Rating: |
May 3, 2011 |
| |
More! (10/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
Snark
(Edit) (May 3, 2011)
- Thank You! For your rating and encouragement. Hole may be back with a different persona; her name was purloined so it will need to be changed. Follow Tuesday in "A New Life"; a new update coming soon!
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Jan 30, 2009 |
| |
Have mixed feelings about this story. The idea is good and presenting the narrative from Hole's point of view works best, but again it's the poor handling of the dialogues that bring down this story.
That and the fact that it reads like each chapter has been written in one breath.
Slowing down the pace would have done wonders. And adding more background about Hole and what motivates her.
Now, she just sounds like an automaton, a robot. Which takes away half the fun.
JJ (7/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
Snark
(Edit) (Mar 1, 2009)
- Sorry you didn't like it. Maybe next time
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
thomas_g50
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Jun 19, 2007 |
| |
I got sucked into the story from the start. (10/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
Snark
(Edit) (Jun 27, 2007)
- Now that sounds like wishfull thinking!
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
chksng19
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Jun 9, 2007 |
| |
A great start to a hot story, literate and well written. Anxious for more, please! (9/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
Snark
(Edit) (Jun 27, 2007)
- Thanks there certainly will be more. And to come.
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
Polecat
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Jun 2, 2007 |
| |
Hot. Believable and well written.
Waiting for the rest (9/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
Snark
(Edit) (Jun 2, 2007)
- Thanks Polecat. Coming from you that's quite a compliment. More to come.
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
J's blu
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Jun 1, 2007 |
| |
hot, well written, moves along well. awaiting further installments with anticipation.
respectfully blu (9/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
Snark
(Edit) (Jun 2, 2007)
- Thank you. I hope your anticipation is satisfied.
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
GuiltyKarma
(Edit) |
Rating: |
May 31, 2007 |
| |
Excellent! i loved the story! It was obvious that the author knows what (s)he writes about! i look forward to reading more!!!! (9/10)
|
| |
- Replied by:
Snark
(Edit) (Jun 2, 2007)
- Thanks for the compliment. Don't confuse too much knowledge for a twisted imagination!
|
|
|
About 