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Vacation with Master
Author: ariana
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(Added on Oct 29, 2001)
(This month 11815 readers) (Total 26236 readers) |
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A girl meets the Master she has been spending time online with She learns total submission under His Rule. |
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| Reviewer:
gojack10
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Apr 9, 2004 |
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The author has taken his time spent in the X-rated video arcades pitching quarters and has used it in his efforts to write great literature. Commendable!
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"Yes" said my Master, "you have caused quite a mess on the floor. On your hands and knees and lick every drop of cum from this floor." I did as I was told. "Not so fast, slowly,enjoy every drop."
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| Reviewer:
Jacen
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Oct 30, 2001 |
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Eh... a decent start but needs more depth. (4/10)
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