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Handjob 101
Author: Steve~
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(Added on May 12, 2007)
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This is about a cfnm story that involves college |
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Average (?):  (4.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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May 15, 2007 |
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Help wanted/ emergency editor....
Seriously, get someone to go over it before you send it off. The writer is rarely the best editor. For instance "the local college football quarterback for the local college" is a little redundant. I suspect you could do better. (5/10)
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Curtis
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May 14, 2007 |
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And again I agree with slvWriting. In addition to his (her?) comments, add that once again you've put the M/f story code on an F/m story, and your spelling leaves something to be desired. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
slvWriting
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May 13, 2007 |
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C'mon, is this a joke? It could barely be called a story...
Besides, it lacks any finale. The "story" ends abruptly. (4/10)
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