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The Man Next Door
Author: Lancer
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(Added on May 6, 2007)
(This month 29620 readers) (Total 51915 readers) |
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Teenage sub sold to neightbor as sex slave. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Nov 23, 2010 |
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Like some of the other reviewers, i liked the way the point of view changed between sub and Dom. The author, in my opinion, has excently captured the exictment and eagerness of how a young and willing sub would react.
i look forward to reading the sequel when it is released. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
SubmissiveCandy
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Jan 12, 2010 |
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I loved the story. I loved reading about the different machines and devices used. Reading your story really had me turned on Sir. I loved how you went from each persons point of view as well so we saw how they were thinking of the different situations. I look forward to reading future stories. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Lancer
(Edit) (Jan 13, 2010)
- Thank yopu so much for your valuable input. The sequel is in the making.
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| Reviewer:
Elkor
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May 12, 2007 |
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Very enjoyable read. The transitions between character perspectives were a little hard to follow sometimes, as it switched rapidly at times. (9/10)
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kurigal24
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May 11, 2007 |
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Excellent work, Lancer Sir !!! i enjoyed reading it *smiles* Can't wait for the next installment (9/10)
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owenowned1
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May 10, 2007 |
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i loved this story. i love the way the view point alternates between sub and Dom. i love the way it captures the mindset of the slave willing to be taken beyond her limits and the Dom who tempers his desire with concern for her well being. Look forward to reading more of their adventures. Lancer- you are amazing! (9/10)
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