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Entertainment
Author: Memento
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(Added on Apr 11, 2007)
(This month 23207 readers) (Total 76624 readers) |
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The first day of the rest of her life |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Jun 26, 2010 |
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Numerous spelling and grammatical mistakes makes this hard to read. (4/10)
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mkemse
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Jan 23, 2009 |
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woth the read (7/10)
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Golden pussy
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Apr 24, 2007 |
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Too much narration, and too little character developement, but still an interesting read. (7/10)
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tbear4759
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Apr 23, 2007 |
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yawn. agree with the others. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
dennisthmn
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Apr 15, 2007 |
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I pity the slave. but she liked it's that what matters (10/10)
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somewriter
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Apr 14, 2007 |
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I agree with the other reviewers - it is just a quick description of events, with no characterisation. Why are the women there? What are they feeling? (6/10)
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chksng19
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Apr 13, 2007 |
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Gee, do you think you could get more stuff happening in a 13K story? Too much, too fast, Memento. The frequent grammatical errors and rushing of the tale make it seem more like a laundry list of tortures than a story.
And the ad at the end? Tacky; this is not the place for such a thing. (Do you really expect a response?) (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Snark
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Apr 12, 2007 |
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The basic requirements for a readable story are present - spelling, grammar, continuity. The descriptions are appropriately graphic. The story seemed poured out in a rush, with little development of the characters or of the story line. It limited any personal emotional involvement that could absorb the reader. Fill out the story and it would be much more enjoyable. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
pollycoventry
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Apr 12, 2007 |
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great start hope u keep it up (9/10)
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