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One Time
Author: SFCityDom
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(Added on Apr 6, 2007)
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Only one time together. |
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| Reviewer:
somewriter
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Apr 13, 2007 |
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Well written, although teasingly short! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
kurigal24{L}
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Apr 8, 2007 |
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i really enjoyed reading it, thanks for sharing :) (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
J's blu
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Apr 6, 2007 |
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i just love Your writing! i may have said that before. You capture the essence so well. no detailed descriptions of every move or look, but the feeling is there. does this story make me hot? hell yes. does this story make me want to be her? hell yes.
thank You for another brilliant short
respectfully blu (10/10)
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