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Unbound limits
Author: Mike thomson
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(Added on Apr 4, 2007)
(This month 31413 readers) (Total 63403 readers) |
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Beautiful Korean American college student finds herself at the hands of her on-line Dom and her best friend when she meets her Dom in person for the first time |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Oct 6, 2010 |
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Interesting story, badly written. Too pedestrian, too narrow vocabulary make this a tiresome read. Sorry to be blunt, but that's how I feel.
Instead of an enjoyable rollercoaster ride, we've got a flat, tepid recollection with as sole highlights some of the descriptions of what's been done to Irene, but that's it...
JJ (6/10)
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MISTRESS H
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Jan 18, 2008 |
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Mike, I liked the flow of the storty, and was really captured by what would happen next, I was a little dismayed by the lack of pain and/or torture, but loved the story. Keep up the good work, and I am looking for more of this story and more from you. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
steph2004ster
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Apr 6, 2007 |
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I agree with dreamgyrl. It almost seems that we are getting a peek behind the scenes of an exciting and developing relationship. Excellent writing, moves at a good pace, keep it up! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
crikey_2004
(Edit) (Apr 6, 2007)
- some people are so perceptive! And thank you for the compliments too... The next chapter is going to be a collaberation of 3....
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| Reviewer:
azrlg17
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Apr 6, 2007 |
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So far the story is cool. The only problem I have with it is the insinuation that at a later part he will betray her (e.g. not honor the safeword/his promises to her). If you do the gorean warrior thing then a part of it is that you can't be a lying scumbag but have to behave in an honorable way and keep your word. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
crikey_2004
(Edit) (Apr 6, 2007)
- I cant even respond to that comment without giving away the plot! argh!
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| Reviewer:
dreemgyrl86
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Apr 5, 2007 |
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There is a feeling of realism to this story that makes one wonder...excellent, keep it up! ^-^ (10/10)
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- Replied by:
crikey_2004
(Edit) (Apr 6, 2007)
- I got a 10! The best praise from the most important reader...
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Mad Lews
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Apr 5, 2007 |
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While I'm not much of a Gor fan you do it better than J. Norman. (A back handed compliment if ever there was one)The story is fast paced and busy, but full of interesting details. Keep up the good work. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
crikey_2004
(Edit) (Apr 5, 2007)
- Thank you for the compliment... Mr Norman had to write so that Grade school students can read his work (at least I was when I began reading the Gor series!) My little Asian slut has been an invaluable assett in editing the story so far too...
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