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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
Highest
Rating:  (9/10) |
Lowest
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| Reviewer:
ThisGirl
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Mar 6, 2007 |
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The story has great potential as an interesting BDSM sci-fi tale, however, I found the writing to shift into awkward grammar that made the scenes confusing.
Although I found it very arousing, I could not give a higher rating because of the odd technical errors and inconsistent form (perhaps lack of form).
(6/10)
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| Reviewer:
ElectricBadger
(Edit) |
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Mar 2, 2007 |
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Interesting, and a difficult review. Definitely a really good story -- well written, well thought out and overall...well, good! However, it could use a quick grammar check, and it does have to be taken on its own terms. Not much in the way of sex or plot here: just a galleria of imagination. (9/10)
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