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Carrie\'s Birthday
Author: Underdog
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(Added on Feb 3, 2007)
(This month 37024 readers) (Total 58034 readers) |
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Upon her birthday, Carrie is initiated into her newfound dominance over the males of her life. Her mother opens the door to dominating her father and older brother, and tells her of the special school she will be attending to teach her the way of Female Dominance as her brother accompanies her as slave. This is the night of her initiation, and it is her birthday, where she receives some special gifts from her brother and father. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (7.5/10) |
Average
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Reviewer:
Ivanoff_s
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Feb 6, 2007 |
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Excellent!!! Please write more about young dominas in female domination households (10/10)
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Reviewer:
makito
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Feb 5, 2007 |
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An excellent start! Please continue this story line and thank you again for sharing your work. I disagree with the other reviewer. (10/10)
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Reviewer:
trainmanretep
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Feb 5, 2007 |
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Compared to your other stories, this reads like a 3rd or 4th grade English composition except for the adult content. Very disappointing. (4/10)
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