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Night Visit
Author: JensenDenmark
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(Added on Feb 1, 2007)
(This month 10219 readers) (Total 19426 readers) |
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Ann is abducted together with her dad. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jul 30, 2007 |
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amazing what codes and a synopsis can do to draw a reader attnetion in (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Feb 6, 2007 |
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Not exactly a bdsm story, but close. Pretty well written for one to whom English is not primary language; I would suggest you find an editor to help you tweak the story and correct minor concerns there.
The story is good, and worth the read (though as a porn story it is lacking... you may get some criticism on that).
I'm looking forward to your next tale! (8/10)
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