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Humiliation of My Hubby
Author: allison
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(Added on Jan 26, 2007)
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this is basically an example of many of the things I do to my little slutty whore man. It tells the story of how he is punished for his freaking lateness one day. |
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| Reviewer:
Becky5000
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Feb 3, 2007 |
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Hi, I liked the cruelty in your story very much, it got me hot. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Jan 29, 2007 |
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The plot is a decent plot. However, the author could use some structure in writing the story. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
trainmanretep
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Jan 28, 2007 |
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The idea is delightfully evil, but the writing is not that great. If this your first effort, please don't be discouraged. Maybe you can find some one to proof-read your story help you make it more "fluid" (5/10)
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