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Submissive Sailing
Author: Lewis Chappelle
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(Added on Jan 3, 2007)
(This month 16431 readers) (Total 34702 readers) |
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Chip and Ann spend an erotic two week honeymoon on a privately chartered schooner staffed by specially selected, all female, crew members. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
ElectricBadger
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Jan 23, 2007 |
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Really good stuff, nice imagination and a great fantasy. I'd suggest smoother transitions (it seems to suddenly jump ahead randomly, ignoring so many possibilities at times) and also to show a bit more of the feelings of the characters. I hope to see more of this work soon! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Jan 5, 2007 |
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The story was excellent well detailed and hot. I look forward to more. It is a minor point but my only confusion was when the punished sailor #4 turned into Kate. Perhaps that was my mistake not yours but it seemed unclear to me. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 3, 2007 |
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this story was for me so hot it kept me going all th way through, i hope you plan to continue with it (10/10)
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