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Where do I begin?
Author: canz
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(Added on Dec 20, 2006)
(This month 80178 readers) (Total 141794 readers) |
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A masochistic young woman remembers how she entered into a painful and incestuous relationship with her father. |
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| Reviewer:
takarada
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Aug 8, 2007 |
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This is excellent, I am glad to see you are continuing the story.. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
canz
(Edit) (Aug 9, 2007)
- Thank you for your enthusiasm and your five stars!
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| Reviewer:
Redstripe1160
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Dec 31, 2006 |
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Great start, well writen. Could lead to some very interesting and painfull scenarios. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
ElectricBadger
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Dec 31, 2006 |
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Great start, I look forward to reading more! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
canz
(Edit) (Dec 31, 2006)
- Thanx - there's a lot more 2 cum!
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| Reviewer:
Jeanne F
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Dec 27, 2006 |
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A very promisong story, but it is only a promise right now so i'll express two wishes! Make sure the slutty daughter keeps her cunny hairless for her beloved owner... and make sure both explore elaborate painful pleasures in detail! Not fearing to go into outlandish or very wicked lengths!
Your writing is very good and i'd love to see a full length book by you along lines even remotely close to those! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
canz
(Edit) (Dec 28, 2006)
- Thanks for your comments - this is my first attempt but I am very encouraged by all the positive remarks I've received so far. There are more chapters ready to go now. I think you'll like them!
Canz
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canz
(Edit) (Dec 28, 2006)
- Thanks for your comments - this is my first attempt but I am very encouraged by all the positive remarks I've received so far. There are more chapters ready to go now. I think you'll like them!
Canz
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| Reviewer:
TheKiwiCharmer
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Dec 26, 2006 |
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Excellent story. Yes it is short so hope there is more to cum. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
canz
(Edit) (Dec 28, 2006)
- Thanks for your comments - this is my first attempt but I am very encouraged by all the positive remarks I've received so far. There are more chapters ready to go now. I think you'll like them!
Canz
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| Reviewer:
Elkor
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Dec 23, 2006 |
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Good start, a little short, but nicely self-contained. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
canz
(Edit) (Dec 28, 2006)
- Thanks for your comments - this is my first attempt but I am very encouraged by all the positive remarks I've received so far. There are more chapters ready to go now. I think you'll like them!
Canz
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Dec 22, 2006 |
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It is rather short, there have been longer scenes in the short takes thread in the forum but it is a well written scene and let's hope you have the time to develope the story a bit more. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
canz
(Edit) (Dec 28, 2006)
- Thanks for your comments - this is my first attempt but I am very encouraged by all the positive remarks I've received so far. There are more chapters ready to go now. I think you'll like them!
Canz
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Dec 22, 2006 |
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the start was good, but more chapters are needed to pas judgement, the beginning was to short as mentioned to pass real judegment (6/10)
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- Replied by:
canz
(Edit) (Dec 28, 2006)
- Thanks for your comments - this is my first attempt but I am very encouraged by all the positive remarks I've received so far. There are more chapters ready to go now. I think you'll like them!
Canz
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Dec 21, 2006 |
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Not a bad start, but too short to really judge. Let's see what the next section brings. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
canz
(Edit) (Dec 28, 2006)
- Thanks for your comments - this is my first attempt but I am very encouraged by all the positive remarks I've received so far. There are more chapters ready to go now. I think you'll like them!
Canz
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