|
|
|
|
|
Tanya Loves Brenda
Author: Wrt4ffun
|
| |
(Added on Dec 13, 2006)
(This month 29454 readers) (Total 50409 readers) |
| |
A chance encounter leads to sex and love. Also involves friendshp, drugs and violence. |
| Ratings and Reviews: |
| Number
of Ratings: 5 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
| 1 |
2 |
3 |
4 |
5 |
6 |
7 |
8 |
9 |
10 |
| 0% |
0% |
0% |
20% |
40% |
20% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
20% |
|
Weighed
Average (?):  (6/10) |
| Average
Rating: (6/10) |
Highest
Rating:  (10/10) |
Lowest
Rating:  (4/10) |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
mkemse
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Aug 28, 2007 |
| |
very diificult to read, you need to work on most aspect of the story (5/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
H Dean
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Jul 18, 2007 |
| |
I tried to get through this story but could not. The writing skilss displayed here were not terrible, but the story had no life. This was largely due to the poor choice of language, lack of proper punctuation and the over use of slang. There was also no focus, as if the authro didn't quite know what to write about. Finally, it seems that this story was written by someone in high school for someone else in high school. Not great but not awful. (5/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
25toLife
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Jul 4, 2007 |
| |
It's pretty hard to cover sex, love, friendship, drugs and violence in 23 kilo bytes.
PS: after reading the 4th chapter, I feel compelled to say: PLEASE FOCUS ON ONE THING INSTEAD OF EVERYTHING. (6/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
amatus
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Jan 6, 2007 |
| |
Liked the story very much, please continue along the storyline. It contains the things I like and especially the respect between the two gals .. (10/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
Elkor
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Dec 19, 2006 |
| |
The story kind of goes all over the place, not really focussing a single element long enough for real satisfaction. (4/10)
|
|
|
About 